
If a stranger walked down this hallway
And peered inside each room
He’d see a lot of sameness
He’d likely feel the gloom
Cell after cell of aging bodies
Remnants from better days
Some will fight on, some will soon leave
For some, it’s their final stay
But Room 6016 has a special case
Much different from the rest
This particular room holds an uncommon man
Just no longer at his best
These medical angels that come in and out
To check and prod and poke
I wish they could know who they’re dealing with here
He’s different from other folk
Come in, kind nurse, and do your thing,
(Like you did just two hours ago!)
But before you re-rob him of much deserved rest
There’s some things I want you to know
This patient lying before you
May look a wasted mess
His body is frail, he’s just skin and bones
And his words no longer make sense!
But there was a time, not long ago
When he was nothing like this
Before this disease would lock its tight grip
There was The Man that we now miss.
A marvelous man, full of all things good
A real charmer to the core
Please let me introduce you
To the man that came before.
As you lean over his bed, don’t you feel it?
That spirit, so good and strong?
He’s a featherweight now, in this frail little body
But his mettle still lives on
Those arms that look so thin and weak
Have hugged me a thousand times
Shoulder hugs, neck locks and good ol’ full ‘rounders
They would wrap around me like vines
His heart? Oh it’s still beating strong
Full of love for all he met!
You will need a bigger stethoscope
To check a heart as big as that!
His eyes are a little bit cloudy these days
I wish I could see where he goes
Fighting old battles and winning old wars
In old places that only he knows
See how he fidgets? You’d think he was mad
But there’s purpose still, in those hands
In the haze of his mind he’s still serving, and giving
Or organizing new plans.
The cuts and bumps upon his head
Can’t deny what was once inside
A bright engineer with huge intellect
With ideas, never before tried.
Old Age is a mean old bastard, I’ve learned
In the end we all look much the same
I just hope if I’m there, someone might be aware
Of what I was, before what I became.

Very well said and a great tribute to your father-in-law.
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That is beautiful, Paul. I love that so much! Every doctor, nurse, therapist, and other healthcare worker should keep this in mind with each patient whom they care for. I think most do, but it’s a very poignant reminder to us as we care for our fellow human beings in their final days.
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This is amazing Dad! I’m printing this out and keeping it.
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How sweetly said. Makes me tear up because it’s all so true with so many of the ones we love so dearly. Thanks for sharing Paul. Rhonda
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Dusty. As you know I work in long term care places. This was read by many of us at work and touched many! This is so true and real life for us! I have a military resident that I knew had a recent pic of him in his dress uniform. I went thru his stuff and pulled those pics out and put them up.
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Thanks Kim. I’m glad you and your co-workers could relate to what I was trying to say. And what a loving thing to do for that veteran patient! I’ve gained a very healthy respect and appreciation for all health care workers during these times with Gene. You all are blessings!
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Wow. Just WOW. That’s all I can say. What an unbelievably poetic and powerful message from the heart.
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What an amazing and heartfelt tribute to Gene. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. Great job!
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Dusty, you have a way with words….so beautiful and eloquent.
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Beautiful Paul!
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~Julie
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So awesome Paul!!
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Paul,
That is beautiful. Your talent for telling a story full of truth and emotion is such a gift.
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Thanks Mom. Glad you liked it!
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I would reply but I am speechless. That was beautiful.
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